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Integrating socratic questioning and synchronous video feedback to enhance ESL learners’ narrative writing in online learning

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ID22428263
AuthorsArathai Din Eak (0009-0003-0424-6219, Wawasan Open University, corresponding author), Nagaletchimee Annamalai (0000-0002-8600-5624, Universiti Sains Malaysia)
Year2026
Pages1-20
Publication date2026-04-14
Peer ReviewedYes
Open AccessNo
TypeARTICLE
VenueInnovation in Language Learning and Teaching (JOURNAL)
Journal identifiersISSN: 1750-1229 • E-ISSN: 1750-1237
PublisherInforma UK Limited (PUBLISHER • GB)
DOI10.1080/17501229.2026.2658187
OpenAlexW7154299187
LanguageEN
References cited31

This study explores how structured Socratic questioning, conducted via live video conferencing, supported narrative revision in an online ESL writing course. It uses Social Cognitive Theory, Self-Regulated Learning, and the Zone of Proximal Development as frameworks to understand the process. The study followed eight undergraduate ESL students across three draft cycles. Data came from video conference transcripts, students’ reflective journals, and pairs of early and revised drafts. A cross-case analysis showed clear patterns of change. Students moved from simply retelling events in time order to organising their narratives around clear internal structures. Their character descriptions developed from surface reactions to deeper identity-level portrayals. Their writing also shifted from summarising events to expressing broader themes and meanings. Reflection data showed that students progressed from focusing mainly on surface editing to regulating and interpreting meaning at a deeper level. The findings suggest that improvement in L2 narrative writing depends not only on what feedback says but also on how it is delivered. Carefully structured questioning during live interaction helped students explain their thinking before revising their texts. This study adds to research on feedback design in online ESL contexts. It shows how structured dialogue can guide students’ development in narrative construction at the discourse level.

Computer-mediated communication · Educational technology · Narrative · Online discussion · Online learning · Online video · Peer feedback · Second language writing · Teaching method · Digital Storytelling and Education · EFL/ESL Teaching and Learning · Literacy, Media, and Education

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