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Cohesion in the Narrative Writing of Young EFL Learners

Correct and Incorrect Use of Local Cohesive Ties

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ID20452005
AuthorsPedro Antonio Férez Mora (0000-0002-7535-1687, Universidad de Murcia), Yvette Coyle (0000-0002-3961-6131, Universidad de Murcia), Juan Solís Becerra (0000-0002-9063-4116, Universidad de Murcia), Juan Antonio Solís Becerra
Year2021
Volume43
Issue1
Pages154-177
Publication date2021-06-28
Peer ReviewedYes
Open AccessYes
TypeARTICLE
VenueAtlantis Journal of the Spanish Association for Anglo-American Studies (JOURNAL)
Journal identifiersISSN: 0210-6124 • E-ISSN: 1989-6840
PublisherAEDEAN (Asociacion Espanola de Estudios Anglo-Norteamericanos) (PUBLISHER)
DOI10.28914/atlantis-2021-43.1.09
OpenAlexW3173881550
LanguageEN
References cited14

This study examines the correct and incorrect use of local cohesive ties and local cohesion errors in the written narratives of eleven- to twelve-year-old Spanish learners of English as a Foreign Language (EFL) at different proficiency levels. The study was carried out with pairs who collaboratively wrote a narrative text in response to a picture prompt. The young learners’ written texts were examined to identify their correct and incorrect use of four categories: lexical, referential, conjunctive and temporal cohesion. The results show that higher and lower proficiency learners are significantly different in their use of the causal conjunction because, personal pronouns and noun phrases containing possessive, definite, indefinite and zero determiners. The two groups also differ in their incorrect use of pronouns, simple verb forms and noun phrases containing definite, indefinite and zero determiners. Attention is drawn to the need to explore the diversity in young learners’ use of cohesion and some pedagogical implications are drawn

Lexical Diversity · Linguistics · Narrative · Noun · Noun phrase · Personal pronoun · Possessive · Simple past · Verb · Vocabulary · Discourse Analysis in Language Studies · EFL/ESL Teaching and Learning · Psychology · Second Language Acquisition and Learning

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